ronthepon Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 my last quatraindedicated to Turtlewho understood,and peered out of his shell at me pulsing.Why last quatrain? What does he mean? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 dancing on the swampthe creature somewhere down therejabbers the jitterbugfor all to see. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 and if you were a trumpetyou would screech tooand if you were a guitari would play you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 there aint nothin'like lifewhen i close my eyesi can see where im going Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 blurring my visionmakes it clear thattiny, moving partsmake up the whole. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 and thats why i love sciencewe set about explaining those partsa long time agoand the earth is yet old Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 jay ombajambajamba wayjamba JUICE! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 someone jive!i mean its coolyoure coolwere cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 godspeed you! black emperor,why do you cry?do your temples fall?do your people die? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 is it this rising rooflinethat makes me feel so swallowed whole?or is it the fact thatmy body barely touches the sky? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loricybin Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 commence your confusionstart it back upbring it on this wayso i can suck on it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loricybin Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 somethingoverthere!somethingoverwhere?somethingunderthere!somethingunderwhere? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loricybin Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 this quatrainisawful -------------------- ah but this one, balanced in timing,seems much better,even, and rhyming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loricybin Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 string of blabber, seemingly setwhat's that song?malcontent? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarantism Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 i tiptoelike a jestercareful with hisdung. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loricybin Posted August 16, 2006 Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 a bouncing steedacross canvases wet and staining visions of chemi-questions Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loricybin Posted August 16, 2006 Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 where did he why did he when did hegohow did he who did he when did heknow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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