Tormod Posted August 22, 2005 Report Share Posted August 22, 2005 It's been a while since I posted a music track so here goes. This is my entry for the August contest over at kvraudio.com. It's a real shocker...my first only piano-based piece with (woot!) NO guitars in sight. Oh, and with my sore throat I hope the vocals are not too of-key. :hihi: If you can't see the embedded player, find this piece and more at:http://kovacs.wusik.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormod Posted August 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2005 For good measure, here are the lyrics: I Weep Feel me. Feel this. Our livesAre not like fish in bowls.We love. We weep. We tryTo keep the poison from our souls."Come here," she said, and I compliedWith wings that only wanted to fly. ./. I weep ./. She touched me with butterfly carePretending there was something thereTo see, to hear, to touch, to senseTo fly, to kill, and then dispense(As if there is some evidence!) ./. I Weep ./. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turtle Posted August 22, 2005 Report Share Posted August 22, 2005 ___I like it very well ;) . I like also you posted the lyrics because my hearing is too dispensed to clearly hear. You musicians amaze me. :D no wait, :hihi: :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormod Posted August 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2005 Thanks, Turtle. We should have a whisky emotikon. I really need one now. *cough* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
infamous Posted August 22, 2005 Report Share Posted August 22, 2005 For good measure, here are the lyrics: I Weep Feel me. Feel this. Our livesAre not like fish in bowls.We love. We weep. We tryTo keep the poison from our souls."Come here," she said, and I compliedWith wings that only wanted to fly. ./. I weep ./. She touched me with butterfly carePretending there was something thereTo see, to hear, to touch, to senseTo fly, to kill, and then dispense(As if there is some evidence!) ./. I Weep ./.Touching lyrics Tormod, now I weep. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rockytriton Posted August 23, 2005 Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 Cool one T, here's one I did a while ago, all instruments are my Alesis QS7, I want to redo it on my Korg Triton some day... http://www.dreamsyssoft.com/rockytriton_storm.mp3 I couldn't figure out how to embed the player like you did.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OpenMind5 Posted August 23, 2005 Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 Music Is a Beautiful thing. I have always wanted to learn to play Piano! You have brought a tear to my eye Tormod. Op5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormod Posted August 23, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 Thanks guys. I think my piece needs to be played with the volume slightly up because it sounds a bit cut-up otherwise (I am not a sound engineer...). :hihi: Rocky, use our music tag, like this: [ music ] url to song [ /music ] (obiously wihout the spaces inside the tags) and the embedded player shows up. It's actually explained at the bottom of this page (not that I think a lot of people would find it...):http://hypography.com/forums/misc.php?do=bbcode Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guadalupe Posted August 23, 2005 Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 I like the melody and the lyrics are like poetry. Together, they sound very nice. :hihi: ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormod Posted August 23, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 Thanks, Guadalupe! I am working hard to learn better vocal production but if I never put anything out I'll never get any feedback either. Better to just jump into it... :hihi: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rockytriton Posted August 23, 2005 Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 you should put your stuff on garageband.com, you can have other artists rate your stuff and you can rate other artists music as well. It's a pretty cool site, I'm on it as userid rockytriton as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormod Posted August 23, 2005 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 That's a good idea, rocky, thanks. I usually hang out here: http://www.kvraudio.com/ - a site mostly about virtual studio technology and music production. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emessay Posted August 23, 2005 Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 Tormod, when I open my poor thesaurus of 'weep',it's meant 'cry' or 'sob'. It's so terrible, I would cry, we cry beauty of infinity , beauty of mind we've tried to understand integrity of universe, our life, and the future. I weep now, I'd like sing to my favourite song 'Moon River', why favourite of me, because I have deep interpretation into mystic of this song and its lyrics. Imagine moon and river when initial life started on Earth since Hadean eon 3.8-4.5 bya, He[God] was alone and silent looking moon moving and river flowing and now I am singing in front of my organ : Moon River, wider than a mile, I'm crossing you in style some day. Oh, dream maker, you heart breaker, wherever you're going I'm going your way. Two drifters off to see the world. There's such a lot of world to see. We're after the same rainbow's end-- waiting 'round the bend, my huckleberry friend, Moon River and me................. I really weep........... :D ............. :hihi: Kind Regards,MusJakarta Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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